关于英语高中作文锦集九篇
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英语高中作文 篇1
Dear Tom,
Your letter reached me yesterday.I'm so sorry.And these are my some thoughts.
Advantage of the cellphone is we can in touch with eath other convinentely,however,there are some disadvantages about it.For example,if you go to school with the cellphone ,it would make bad influence on teaching.What's more,the cellphone is harmful to your health,your eyes will be worse and worse,your body will be weaker and weaker and so on.So,I don't think it's terrible for you to use the cellphone at the school.
These are my thoughts,I hope they will be useful for you.
英语高中作文 篇2
Last week our music teacher taught us a song, named Indebted Heart. Through it I know that we should live with a thankful heart. At that time, I think of my parents. I think they are the first people I should thank.
It’s them who give me life. It’s them who give me home. It’s them who bring me up.
It’s them who look after me. It’s them who teach me knowledge and live happily.
I should thank my parents giving me so much.
Maybe I should think how to pay back the love my parents give me. But now I think the best way to be appreciated of my parents is to study well and then being a useful person to the society when I grow up.
上周我们的音乐老师教了我们一首歌,叫感恩的心。通过这首歌我知道我们应该怀着一颗感恩的心去生活。
在那时,我想起了我的父母。我认为他们是我最应该感谢的人。是他们给了我生命。是他们给我一个家。
是他们抚养我长大。是他们在照顾我。是他们教给我知识,给了我幸福快乐的生活。
我要感谢我的父母给了我这么多。也许我应该考虑如何回报父母给我的一切。
但现在我觉得感谢我父母的最好的方法就是好好学习,长大后做一个对社会有用的人。
英语高中作文 篇3
Deforestation
as time goes , there are more and more world problems about nature and development. i think deforestation is the most serious environmental problem that the earth has to face.
with more and more trees cut down, many kinds of birds or animals have no homes and become etinct. just a few years later, we will no longer be able to see so many lovely and beautiful creatures which once eist.
with more and more trees cut down, lots of good land become deserts. then the soil will be washed away more easily ,which will eventually lead to floods and draughts .remember the big flood that broke out in 1998? many people become homeless and i will never forget the sad and eager eyes of hundreds of children .but what we should realize is that it is we human beings that has strengthened the power of the flood, for we’ve cut down so many trees near the changjiang river. the disaster is just a response from nature, as well as a great pain to us.
with more and more trees cut down, the power of the surface of the earth to control the climate is being reduced greatly. the earth's surface temperature is rising little by little and finally cities along the seaside will be greatly affected.
in fact, desertification, global warming and other big problems are all the results of deforestation.
but many of us have not yet been clear enough about the importance of the problem .you may tell me that you yourself are quite aware of it. but do you still use the only-once chopsticks? and always think the paper handkerchiefs are not enough?
so there's a lot we have to change actually.
if you don't want to endanger the net generations and don't want to see an end to our planet, please take action!
just stop using one more pair of that kind of chopsticks and take along a handkerchief, we can make a big difference. and when you're sure that you will not feel sorry to the environment, and your friends to come with you. the world belongs to all of us and we all have responsibility to make it better. if every one does make a little contribution to the environment. i believe a bright future of the planet will come soon.
英语高中作文 篇4
Six years old, my father and mother to play in Jinan.
Arrived in Jinan, my mother said to me: "Taishan in Jinan, we have to go to Mount Taishan?" I heard a surprise, the original world famous Taishan in Jinan! I quickly answered: "Yes, yes, we Go now.
We ride to the foot of Mount Tai. I look at the top of Mount Tai, how can not see the head, I am afraid of some. But my father said: "You want to see the beauty, it can only board the top of the mountain, infinite scenery in the Xianfeng it!" I listened, did not hesitate to climb to the top of the hill. Boarded the hillside, I am tired, legs a little soft, they would like to sit down and rest for a while, my father pointed to the front, I looked at it, was actually Nantianmen. Dad said to me: "In the myth, the East China Sea Dragon King is in this was beaten by this meal, after the Nantianmen, the scenery more beautiful." I heard, the spirit of the lifted, they summon the courage to continue climbing. After the Nantianmen, the distance has been carried out more than half of the. I and my father tired of panting, intends to sit on the stone steps for a while. My mother scolded: "This is not a place to rest, to rest back to the hotel lying, really unpromising." I heard, said to my father: "We are tired, we can not let the mother to let us fall." , And pulled me away, I think: see how my mother also trained us.
Finally boarded the top of the hill, looking around, I saw the clouds around the clouds, white clouds floating at my feet, I am intoxicated, as if to the Temple. In the distance, a mountain peak of the forest, the magnificent, pines and cypresses, lush, a good paradise on earth! As Dad said, infinite scenery in the Xianfeng ah!
Climbing is the will of the temper, is the embodiment of perseverance. The mountain so that I understand the "world is no trouble, as long as the climb" the truth.
英语高中作文 篇5
It is Chinese tradition to give children red pocket money during Spring Festival. The red pocket money means the good wishes to the children. But as the time went by, the amount of money needs to be added, and some people even judge a person by the money that he gives to the children. It has become a burden for the young people, because if they don’t give a lot of red pocket money to the children, others will look down upon them. For the young people, they are under great pressure. They need to pay for the house and meet the basic needs. Sometimes the pocket money may cost more than a month’s salary. What a great burden. The meaning of red pocket money is to bring luck to children, instead of asking for money.
英语高中作文 篇6
Helping Those People Who Need Helps
As the economy develops constantly, our lives have a great changed. But we can't ignore that some people are still poor and can't hold on their families. I think it is necessary to help those underprivileged people.
Maybe some people will consider the money, but contributing is only as a means of helping them. We also have many other ways to help them. It is important for us to do some things which we can do, which can spread to all the society. When all people are unconcious to do these things, our society become really perfect.
Helping others is simple, such as giving some books or clothes. If you have a kind heart, you will become a candle to light this world.
英语高中作文 篇7
It is known to all that China has the history of more than 5,000 years and the culture influences generations. No matter where people live, they keep the traditional festivals. Such as the people who live in Chinatown. Though some of them have been immigrants, they still celebrate the traditional festivals. So in every corner of Chinatown, the Chinese traditional features can be seen everywhere. The preservation of the traditional culture is the key to help the country live so long. After the long period of time, the essence of the culture part have been inherited while the negative part has been removed. Many culture even influences the foreign country, such as Confucius Institution, where foreigners learn Chinese culture and mandarin. Though we are facing the impact of Hollywood culture, the traditional festivals provides an important way to save local culture.
英语高中作文 篇8
摘要:本研究考察了高中学生英语作文中人称、指示和比较三种指称衔接手段的使用情况。研究发现高中生英语作文中以上三种指称衔接在使用上存在很多问题及错误。本文详细分析了高中生英语作文中指称衔接不恰当使用的原因,并由此针对改善高中写作教学、提高学生写作质量提出了建议。
关键词:人称指称;指示指称;比较指称
一、引言
Halliday和Hasan(1976)认为,衔接是关系到语篇连贯的一个必要条件。本文在Halliday与Hasan的衔接理论以及对衔接手段分类的基础上,对高中生英语作文中指称衔接的使用情况进行了分析,同时深入探讨了导致学生指称衔接不恰当使用的原因,旨在帮助学生加强衔接手段使用的意识。同时,也有利于促进高中生的英语写作教学,提高学生的写作质量。
二、理论基础
Halliday和Hasan将指称衔接分为人称指称、指示指称和比较指称这三类,本文将基于此分类方法进行研究。
一)人称指称
人称指称是运用话语情景中的功能、通过人称类别表现的指称。人称代词、所有格形容词和所有格代词均包含在人称指称的范畴之内。
二)指示指称
指示指称基本上是一种用词语指示的形式。指示指称主要包括副词指示代词以及名词性指示代词以及定冠词the。
三)比较指称
比较指称可以分为一般比较和特殊比较两大类。一般比较仅指相似和不相似方面的比较,即比较双方可以是相同、相似或不同。特殊比较指的是量或质方面的比较。量一般指数量,质的比较也由比较级形容词和副词表示。
三、研究方法
一)研究问题
本研究主要分析高中生英语作文中指称衔接在使用上存在的问题,同时探讨其原因,旨在给高中英语写作教学提供一些参考。
二)研究对象及语料搜集
本次研究以烟台一中高二学生为研究对象,要求学生完成一篇120字左右的英语议论文,题目为“Gap Year”,从学生完成的有效作文中随机抽取了60份。分析了学生英语作文中各类指称衔接使用存在的问题,并深入探索其原因。
三)统计分析方法
按照指称衔接的以上分类,分别统计学生每一篇作文中人称指称、指示指称和比较指称的数目。同时,辨认出样本作文中以上三类衔接的使用错误,并且统计出各自数目,深入探讨造成这些衔接错误的原因。
四、研究结果与讨论
一)指称衔接分布情况分析
表4.1表明了抽取的60份高二学生样本作文中这三类指称衔接及其错误的分布情况。从表中统计数据可以看出,在各类指称衔接中,人称指称使用的.最为频繁,次数达到了471次,比例为58.36%;指示指称次之,次数为264次,比例为32.84%;比较指称的使用频率要远远低于前两者,样本作文中比较指称的使用次数只有72次,比例仅为8.92%。
从表中可以看出,样本作文中人称指称的使用次数要远远超出指示指称和比较指称的使用次数。此现象可以从以下几个方面来进行分析。第一,这篇文章是说明文和议论文的结合,所以很多时候需要学生对gap year进行描述并且就学生是否进行 gap year发表观点。所以学生在写作时大量地使用了人称指称去描述这一现象或者发表自己的观点,因此在样本作文中人称指称使用频率很高。第二,由于文章题材的关系以及文章内容的限制,所以学生在写作时较少地使用了表示相同、相似、不同、表示比较以及表示数量的比较指称。
二)指称错误及其原因分析
通过表4.1的统计数据可以看出,学生在指称衔接的使用上存在很多错误。通过分析样本作文发现,学生在写作中所犯的指称错误具体表现为以下四类:
1. 人称代词不连续、切换频繁
学生经常会潜意识地把单数指称代词切换到复数指称代词,把第一人称代词切换到第二人称代词。这种不连续的、前后不一致的人称代词会让读者感到混淆。
例1:Taking a gap year is popular with American students, it offers students some opportunities to earn money, and they can help us get more social experience.
這种人称代词不连续的现象的产生可能是由于写作时学生情绪比较紧张,或者是由于学生比较粗心而造成的。如果学生能够仔细检查他们的作文,这些人称代词的错误大部分都是可以被发现并且改正的;
另一方面,学生母语的影响也使得学生频繁切换人称代词,因为写作时他们可能是在逐字地把脑海中的中文翻译成英文。
例2:I believe that all of you will benefit a lot from taking a gap year.
2. 定冠词the的过度使用
在指示指称部分,样本作文中出现的最多的指示指称项目就是定冠词the。朱叶秋(20xx)发现,中国学生在三类冠词的使用中都会出现不同的错误,包括定冠词的过度使用。周保国(20xx)则认为,低水平英语学习者定冠词误用要多于高水平英语学习者。
例3:Thegap year is very usual in western countries for the senior high students.
例4:Today, Id like to introduce an interesting cultural phenomenon called the Gap Year.
在这两个例句中,定冠词 the都属于过度使用,可以删掉。
林佳嫣(20xx)研究认为,学习者可能会出于交际目的过度使用定冠词来指称首次出现的名词,如使用定冠词为了强调某种情感,或是引出某个话题。
例5:In western countries, some students choose to have a gap year between the graduation of high school and the entrance to college.
此句中,学生在graduation of high school和entrance to college前面都误加了定冠词the,可能是因为该生认为高中毕业和进入大学都是非常重要的事。
3. 名词性指称项目很少使用
此外,学生很少在作文中使用名词性指称项目this和that及其附属形式these和those。鉴于this和that在汉语中没有进行严谨地区分,很多高中学生没有准确掌握this和that的用法,而选择不去使用它们。黄灿和罗辉(20xx)认为,学生喜欢使用定冠词the来替代this和that,这是因为定冠词the同样可以用来充当指示指称,学生在写作时使用the可以不用费力来推敲某个地方到底该用this还是该用that。这些错误基本上是受母语影响造成。
例6:In the western countries, some students can relax for a whole year without going to school after high school graduation.
例7:Besides, the measure lets them be their own masters and leads to a meaningful life.
4. 比较指称使用单一
研究发现,高中生在写作中不太喜欢用比较指称,而且比较指称的使用也比较单一。由于高中生英语水平的限制,他们对于要求相对较高的比较指称词汇运用还不够自如,为了避免错误,他们会有意识地避开此类单词的使用。即使写作过程中需要用到此类词汇时,他们也会选择相对比较简单的一些词汇来表达自己的观点。
就一般比较指称而言,学生在样本作文中使用的较多的一般比较指称就是单词different,用来形容参加间隔年的学生可以参加的不同活动或者获得的不同体验。
例8:Traveling to different places also contributes to improving their communication skills and make them more confident to talk with people.
而在特殊比较指称方面,学生在作文中频繁地使用了单词more,用来进行数量和性质上的比较。
例9:During this gap year, some students work as volunteers to know more about the society and gain more experience for their future life.
此外,学生在样本作文中还大量地使用了more and more这一搭配,这也是造成样本作文中特殊指称项目“more”大量使用的原因。
例10:Nowadays, confronted with more and more challenges in society, many students choose to spend an extra year experiencing life instead of coming into the university immediately.
五、結论
通过以上分析可以看出,高中学生英语作文中指称衔接的使用上存在很多问题,这些指称衔接的不当使用主要可以归纳为学生母语负迁移的影响,学生在写作时缺乏衔接意识和语篇意识以及英语教师在写作教学中过多地强调语法和句型,脱离语境进行写作教学。因此,英语教师在教学中应该尽力帮助学生克服母语负迁移带来的影响,在写作教学中有效地引入衔接理论,在平时的英语教学中有意识地培养学生的衔接意识和语篇意识,提高英语写作教学的效果,改善学生的英语写作质量。
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英语高中作文 篇9
it was during a weekend. mum gave me two tickets for a film and told me she was too busy with the endless housework to go with me . she told me to keep the money if i could sell the etra ticket. i was very happy, of course . at that time , a ticket only cost 20 fen . but to me, a little girl of 12,20 fen seemed quite a lot.
i reached the cinema in a great hurry. holding the ticket in my hand, i began to look for a buyer. a handsome young man noticed me and the ticket in my hand. he came towards me with a big smile, “you've got an etra ticket?”
“yes,”i nodded .
“that's great . say , how much?”
“twenty fen.”
“ oh ,”he thought for a while and then took out a ten-yuan note from his wallet.
“i'm very sorry, but i've only got this note.” seeing i was confused① , he added, “then, how about waiting for a while and i'll give you the money after i have changed it in the cinema's store?”
without much thinking, i agreed. then we went to the cinema together. he walked fast. i could hardly keep up with him. by and by, he left me further and further behind. soon he disappeared in the gents②. i stood there without knowing what to do. suddenly i seemed to realize the handsome young fellow had cheated me. he had saved twenty fen, but lost his honour.